Thursday, April 17, 2008

happy poem # 3

flung and flapped up on the tree
ticked and tapped just to see
i wonder how far i wonder how low
i wanted to see how far i can go

it seems to right it seems to wrong
i twist and tap to get alone
you look in my eyes and i look back
i kick and slap just to fight back,

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

Good use of alliteration, but you forgot your similes.